An Ocean of Purity, Competitions and Awards

An Ocean of Purity by Frank Prem - book cover image
An Ocean of Purity – Book Cover Image

🪞 Who is in the Mirror?

Every year I notice awards opening up that carry a certain heft for Australian poetry and I’ve been exploring this recently over on my WordPress blog. Each time I focus on these awards, I ask myself questions: Where does my work fit in? What would I choose to represent my work in these poetic arenas?

Two awards competitions that stand out are the Newcastle Poetry Prize and the Blake Poetry Prize. Both have a long tradition of showcasing work that digs into questions of identity, meaning, and how we see the world around us, and which – sometimes, at least – seem to fit a lot of the work that I do.

The piece below is one that I might well consider for submission to either award. It touches, I think, an aspect of the way we see ourselves, in this case, via a transient reflection from the perspective of the mirror.


in repose

the mirror
in repose
faced a room
filled
with slumber

nothing came
and passed
without notice

dust
danced
devils motivated by the sun

nothin . . .

          what is this
          who is this

a woman

stood before it

neither slender
nor stout
nor so very tall

          who is this
          is it
          me

I move
when she moves

          we are one

          I feel
          a rightness

now she is
before me

          I am splendid
          dressed
          as I am
          in these fine clothes

I can dance
I can whirl
look look
I can admire myself
when I glance back
across my shoulder

look at me
just look at me

I am so beautiful . . .

the room
in repose
filled
with slumber

against a wall
facing the room
the glass of a mirror
showed nothing
passing by
without notice

🪞


The poem emerged from my contemplation of the poetics of the element of Water, as explored by the French philosopher Gaston Bachelard. Instead of competition entry, however, it has found its home in my newly released poetry collection, An Ocean of Purity – Bachelard Interpreted Book 5.

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Thanks for reading.

~ Frank

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