Newsletter Questions – June 2019

In my June Newsletter, I raised with subscribers a couple of questions that intrigue me, as a writer of poetry in this contemporary age I’m living in, where the book buzz seems to be all about prose, thrillers and horror, cozy mysteries and romance.

Franchise series in sets of three, four, five books.

Paranormal romance.

The Newsletter asks:

Do you consider yourself to be a poetry reader, and if so, what sort of poetry do you find interesting to read? Where do you find it?
and
If you don’t consider yourself a poetry reader, can you share your thoughts on why not? Did you ever enjoy reading it, but not anymore?

A number of subscribers have responded, including Victoria Ray from the RaynotBradbury blog, where she has herself posed the first question and prompted some very interesting discussion among her visitors.

While preserving anonymity,I’ll post a sampling of responses, below:

DK says:

I do like poetry but I don’t read much – largely because I have so many novels, history, biography etc that I have not yet read.

I prefer the free verse works.

My major source at the moment is therefore WP.

 

 

 

Frank says:

I find that the more sophisticated my pallet becomes, the more I need rhyme to assume a subtle role. My favorite saying is that rhyme should be invisible, while free verse should be a song.

As a free verse writer, myself, I am constantly in pursuit of the music that I think resides in our language. I believe our spoken word is actually us singing to each other.

I think we’re going to see that WP, or other blog sites are the primary source of access to poetry.

CW says:

I definitely consider myself a poetry reader from an early age as reading books was a terrific pastime growing up. 

Of course the required poetry in school was not always what I preferred but I still remember them. 

I don’t always agree with others’ interpretations of poetry. 

I take the words and form my own pictures with them. 

 I have found many interesting poets and forms of poetry here on WordPress.

CW

 

 

 

 

 

Frank says: 

I too was a voracious reader from an early age.

The poetry I remember, was the poetry of my schooling, when we would utilise an annual Reader, containing poetry and short stories that were considered notable at the time.

Of Australian poets, A B (the Banjo) Patterson and Henry Lawson stand out.

(I commend Clancy of the Overflow by Patterson, and The Drover’s Wife, a short story by Lawson to you, and another time might engage in pulling apart Clancy, and reassembling it in my own style to emphasise the way I believe it should be read).

Of other poetry from childhood, does anyone remember this:

slowly silently now the moon/walks the night in her silver shoon/this way and that she peers and sees/silver fruit upon silver trees . . .

Silver, by Walter de la Mare. I have never forgotten it.

CW creates her own imagery from the words. Such a powerful poetic gift.

Anon says:

Yes, I read poetry, but not a lot.

In the case of anything worth reading, the first line or two has to catch me, and I’ll follow the trail. I use poetry, rather than write it.

What for? To inspire the inner beats within, to find a breath that matches the mood, to dance the words into meaning.

It matters not whence it comes, it comes …

I like poetry that has a depth, that isn’t maudlin or rambling, and that connects a deep emotion in few words.

Poetry inspires me, my muse, my music and my sense of self.

Frank says:

Seduction by opening line. So important in writing.

And when engaged, the poem can inspire yet other work of creativity (I know Anon to be a published writer). A musical creativity, if I read between the lines correctly.

An ability to engage the emotions of a reader and to inspire, as a consequence.

Thank you, Anon.

 

 

 

Victoria Ray’s discussion

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Frank says:

For the most part, I encourage you to visit Victoria’s blog and her post on this topic. Take a look at the train of comments, as I think it is informative.

I must mention, though, the form known as ‘Cowboy Poetry’ which was referred to by Tom Darby, who mentioned the poem Lasca by Frank Desprez.

I found this very interesting as it reminds me immediately of cowboy songs I first heard in the old American cowboy movies, but also because I see an immediate parallel with what is known in Australia as Bush Poetry  – full of galloping rhyme and charateristic rhythms. Originally the style of Patterson and Lawson et al, but carried on to this day.

Sandra says:

No, not really, although I love to read words that are cleverly or beautifully put together.

I read the book by Kurdish refugee Behrouz Boochani called “No friend but the Mountains”, and liked his use of poetry to tell the story.

I enjoyed reading poetry when I was at school and at Uni. (Particularly liked Gerard Manly Hopkins).

I really don’t know why I haven’t  read it anymore, maybe because it is not readily available, and I don’t think to seek it out.

 

 

Frank says:

I agree that beautiful structure is important, though I don’t always know how to achieve that.

A thing that I harp on is that there is music in the language that we speak. Inflections and nuance, emphasis and pause and so on.

Finding the rhythm of speech is also finding its beauty.

I wonder if changes in poetry fashion have made it less relevant to and within people’s lives.

It does feel like part of the task for someone like myself: to make the verse we write meaningful to people who are flat out just trying to live their own lives.

I’ll let this discussion go here, but please feel free to contribute through the comments box, below.

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YouTube Premiere: A Trailer for Small Town Kid – loss of faith

My YouTube channel will premiere a new video reading from the Small Town Kid collection today (June 21) at 18:00 hours (GMT + 10).

This video is a reading of the poem loss of faith, and I think it touches, in a small way, the difficult lot of immigrant women in a new land.

Click here to go to my YouTube Channel.

I hope you enjoy the video. Don’t forget, the book is available in bothe-book and paperback.

If you’ve read it already (thank you), I’d love to see a review on Amazon or Goodreads if you feel inclined to comment.

#Bookreview #Poetry – Devil in the Wind by Frank Prem — Robbie’s inspiration

Thank you, Robbie Cheadle for a warm and wonderful review of Devil In The Wind.

Do check out Robbie’s pages for her own work. She is a diverse and varied author, and an exemplary cook, from what I’ve seen. 

What Amazon says Devil In The Wind is an account of catastrophic fire and its immediate aftermath. In this 21st century, the whole world seems to be on fire. America burns. Europe burns. Greece is reeling after its own tragedy of fire. And Australia burns, as it has always done, but now so much more […]

#Bookreview #Poetry – Devil in the Wind by Frank Prem — Robbie’s inspiration

mcalpines cherries – video reading on YouTube

My YouTube channel will premiere a new video reading from the Small Town Kid collection today (June 11) at 17:00 hours (GMT + 10).

This poem is called mcalpines cherries and tells of an adolescent playing at earning pocket money by fruit picking.

Find the video here subscribe to my YouTube channel here.

Don’t forget, the book is available in e-book and paperback. If you’ve read it already (thank you), I’d love to see a review on Amazon or Goodreads if you feel inclined to comment.

Exercises on the Inspiration for Writing

Welcome to this new writing challenge endeavor! 

I’ve recently decided that it would be useful for me to take a look through my poetry archives and contemplate the origins of poems, particularly to think about what might have inspired them at the time they were written.

I wondered also, if this might be something that others could participate in. If I share the inspiration, behind my archival piece, would visitors and writers be interested or willing to share a piece of work – old or new – using the discussion as a prompt, similarly to the way prompts are being used on a number of blog sites, at present.

Interested?

How can you participate? Use my discussion as a prompt to write a poem or some prose on your own blog, then create a pingback to the prompt page or post your link in the comment section –  (please check to ensure your link appears in one form or another). Find out more about pingbacks here.

The first exercise is posted here.

Around the start of each new month, I’ll post a list participant links to encourage other bloggers to have a look at what inspires you.

If you have any questions, drop me a line and we’ll probably manage to work it out.

My thanks to and acknowledgement of the folk whose prompts I follow and often respond to. Check out the few I’ve listed below, and join a growing community of folk responding to prompts online.

Fandango’s One Word Challenge (FOWC)

Ragtag Daily Prompt

Reena’s Exploration Challenge

Cee Neuner has a quite comprehensive round up of Challenge or Prompt pages listed at her For the Love of Challenges page.

Exercises on the Inspiration for Writing #01 June 7th 2019 – poetry of place

When I lived in the city of Melbourne, around the year 2000, I was often entranced by the cosmopolitan nature of different parts of the city. Suburbs had particular ethnicity reflected throughout them, neighboring suburbs a little different. Whole shopping precincts had their own particular ethnic flavor. St Kilda, for instance had cake shops on cake shops – German, French, Jewish.

And Lygon Street, in Carlton was predominantly about Italian cuisine, with a few other nationalities squeezing.

Walking down Lygon Street in the evening was an encounter with street-side diners chatting volubly, ushers of the footpath enticing you to dine at the establishment with a complimentary bottle of wine thrown in. It was a heady hubbub.

Here is part of what I wrote on such a night in the poem Lygon Street:

lygon street is alive tonight
it’s only a thursday
but there are bodies everywhere
looking for a feed in the evening
I can’t avoid a spruiker standing outside
with his best moustache and a menu
twitching at a chance to tempt me in
with a free red wine and something special
but I’m just walking now
taking in the scene and the people
scattered everywhere on a cold night
in the middle of july . . .

Read the rest of the poem Lygon Street, here.

How can you participate? Use my discussion as a prompt to write a poem or some prose on your own blog about a place that has inspired you, then create a pingback to the prompt page or post your link in the comment section –  (please check to ensure your link appears in one form or another). Find out more about pingbacks here.

Around the start of each new month, I’ll list participant links that have appeared as pingbacks or as posted links in the comment section of this post.

If you have any questions, or if you notice that I have messed up something in this process, drop me a line and I’ll probably manage to work it out.

~

strength of a truckie – video reading on YouTube

My YouTube channel will premiere a new video reading from the Devil In The Wind collection today (June 06) at 14:30 hours (GMT + 10).

This poem is a piece that moves me incredibly each time I read it, almost to tears. Even with the familiarity that I have with the piece. Strange business, but there we are.

This piece is called ‘the strength of a truckie’ and it is set in the aftermath of the fires.

Find the video here. 

Don’t forget, the book is available in e-book and paperback. If you’ve read it already (thank you), I’d love to see a review on Amazon or Goodreads if you feel inclined to comment.